Recess RIP
There once was a young boy playing on the playground of his school. On the playground, there was a manhole leading to the sewers that all the teachers warned the students not to go near. The boy was always curious about the hole and what might be down there. Why would the teachers not want him down there? Is there a secret tunnel leading to a secret meeting room that the teachers use? Is there candy in this room? He was set on finding out, but could never get it open.
It is the fall, there are leaves everywhere. Big, beautiful golden leaves practically cover the entire playground. The children gather the leaves into many piles and jump into them carefree. However, the boy is fixated on the manhole. It has yellow tape around it and there are construction workers working on it. He watches as they leave on their lunch break and realizes this might be the only chance he has to find out what is in the hole. Leaves are clogging it up so much that he can't even see where the hole is. He waited until the teachers weren't looking, slid under the yellow tape, and instantly fell into the hole. He is so scared that he can't even scream. He hits the ground hard and it feels like he broke his leg. He then looked up and saw Pennywise the clown staring at him, holding a red balloon. He lets out a big yell when seeing him but it is no use, he is too deep in the hole for the teachers to hear him.
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The end.
Author's Note:
In the original story, a hunter travels to a family's house and is warned not to hunt on the north side of the land because of a deadly snake. The hunter's curiosity gets the best of him and he goes there anyways. When he finds the snake, he tries running away but the snake gets him anyways. He struggles to get away and finally does when he wafts his body odor in the snakes nose and it runs away. I wanted to keep the similar theme of curiosity nearly killing the cat but the cat getting away barely. I also wanted to get a little more creative and make the theme more modern. I also figured since Halloween is so close that I would make a story with a more spooky theme!
Bibliography:
The Hunter And The Uksu'hï by James Mooney
Connor,
ReplyDeleteThanks for terrifying me to death!!! I saw IT last week and cried basically the whole time so this picture completely triggered me. Other than that I really like the way you modernized the story (and I mean it is Halloween) and liked that you gave it a happy ending! Great job!
Hi Conner, this story sounds like my worst nightmare... I haven't seen IT yet but just the idea of being trapped in a hole with a clown is traumatizing. I am very glad that the kid made it out okay. Thanks for making a happy ending to this terrifying story.
ReplyDeleteConnor, Well first off your image scared me half to death. My biggest fear in life is clowns so thank you for the scare lol. Perfect timing with your story since today is Halloween! I could not focus on your story too much, not because it was not good but more so because I do not like scary stories at all. Good job!
ReplyDeleteHey Connor!
ReplyDeleteFrist of all I really enjoyed reading your story, “Recess RIP.” I like how you set your story in a modern time. Also, I thought giving your story a spooky feel since it is close to Halloween was really creative. Further your picture I think complemented your story perfectly. Overall, I think you did a great job on this story!
Hello Connor,
ReplyDeleteWhat a funky story. I could not tell if your story was supposed to be scary or funny but it seemed to have a little of each element. I have just one logistical question for you: How was the boy able to run if he broke his leg? You did a good job and I look forward to reading more from you.
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ReplyDeleteHi again, I love how you incorporated Pennywise into this. I loved the movie so when I saw his face in the story, I knew I would like it. I like how the story ended up having the things the boy wished would be in the tunnel and I like how he could overcome Pennywise. I wonder if other kids will decide to make the adventure into the manhole. Great story!
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