Thursday, September 7, 2017

Week 4 Story: Man's Best Friend

Man's Best Friend
By Connor Dugan

Long before written history, dogs were not the cute and fuzzy animals they are today.  They were ferocious, powerful, and cold blooded killers.  They practically ruled the earth with their incredible coordination and hunting skills.  Man could all but cower in fear if one approached.

A man named Joseph walked through a deep and dark rocky forest, looking for mushrooms for stew.  It was ominous, foggy, and incredibly humid.  Sweat dripped down his whole body as he searched the ground for precious fungi.  This lasted some hours, until he heard a horribly cry.  Joseph knew it would be incredibly dangerous to investigate, but he couldn't help himself.  He climbed over the hills, tracked down where it was coming from, and gazed upon Doggious, the god of the Dogs.

Doggious had been hunting in the woods.  In fact, he was on to Joseph's scent and was about to make him a meal.  This all came to a halt when a large boulder came crashing down a near rocky hillside and landed upon his leg.  He was now trapped.  The more he tried to move, the more he ended up just hurting himself.  He laid there in defeat, waiting to be killed or to simply rot away.

Joseph cautiously came nearer to Doggious.  He had heard the legends of Doggious of how intimidating, strong, and deadly he was.  There were rumors that if Doggious were killed, that all dogs would lose their coordination and would no longer be able to rule the world.  Joseph felt for his large spear he always carried on him, and was ready to put an end to the rule dogs had over the land.  But something came upon him.  As he saw the beast yelping and crying, a sudden rush of empathy came upon him.  He got a crazy idea, even crazier than approaching the beast in the first place.

Doggious stared at Joseph as he came eye to eye with the beast.  Joseph nodded at Doggious, and raised his spear, ready to strike.  Doggious closed his eyes, accepting his fate.  But, as Joseph's spear came down, it came not upon Doggious' heart, but was wedged under the boulder, where he proceeded to pry the boulder off Doggious' leg.

Doggious immediately pounced upon Joseph, and Joseph held his breath as if it were his last.  And as Doggious opened his mouth to bite, he instead licked Joseph's face of his sweat.  Doggious thanked Joseph, and explained to him that because of his show of character and empathy, all dogs would serve as noble friends to the human race.  They could hunt, live, and progress together much better than on their own.  And what started as a horrible war became a lasting friendship that exponentially benefited both parties.

And that is how dogs became man's best friend.

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Guarding with Man's Best Friend sourced via Wikipedia

Author's Note:

The original story, The Quarrel of the Cat and Dog, was about how cats and dogs became enemies.  It begins explaining that the Cat and Dog were great friends.  They got along very well and were the greatest of companions.  But when winter game and food was scarce, they made an agreement to go their separate ways, but the dog accidentally breaks the agreement and the cat never forgives him.
I wanted to do an opposite of this story, explaining how a feud becomes friendship.  I thought the perfect example for this would be the relationship between man and dog.

Bibliography:

The Quarrel of the Cat and Dog by Gertrude Landa

6 comments:

  1. Great rendition of the story Conner. I love any story that has to do with dogs and this one was no exception. I loved the some-what merger of the Lion and the Thorn story as well as the Quarrel of the Cat and Dog. I thought you did a great job giving the characters "character" if you will. Anyways keep it up and good job!

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  2. Wow! What a great story Connor!! I was so scared when Joseph raised his spear and also when Doggious jumped on Joseph! you created such suspense in those moments but I was glad to see everything worked out! I wonder what would have happened if Joseph didn't save Doggious, would dogs lose their power and eventually have to work for men? but hate them instead of be friends? You didn't explain much about Doggious besides he was the god of the dogs, what if you elaborated on his background too? Overall I loved your story especially since it is about dogs!!

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  3. Hey Connor, great job with the story. Looking at your Author's Note, I saw that your source of inspiration was the Quarrel of Cats and Dogs, but while I was reading it, I saw a lot of Aesop's Fable: The Lion in it. More specifically, it was very reminiscence to that of the story between the homeless man and the Lion, where the Lion was saved by the man, and spared during their fight in an arena. For the sake of the assignment, I was wondering why you made Doggius the God of Dogs. ou could've maybe made Doggius display some more of his god-like abilities. My "what if" scenario: What if you had set the story in modern times? I would have been curious to see how this story would translate into a modern setting. Again, these "critiques" are just nitpicking. You did an amazing job, and I look forward to reading your future writings!

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  4. Ha, that is a funny story. Short, sweet, and to the point. I have not actually read a dog as man's best friend origin story before. Doggious is a great name. It would also be a good actual pet name. The picture in the sunset is kind of cool. It reminds me of that movie where the kid's dog gets sent to war.

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  5. I really enjoyed your story; any story about dogs is a good story in my book. I own three of them myself. I have never really thought about the origin story of man’s best friend but I think it’s a very interesting topic and you did a good job executing it. Do make sure to reread your stories for any typos or errors, it can be a little distracting and break the flow of the story. I am often guilty of the same thing and could do better myself. Anyways, good job!

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  6. Hi Connor, I love the descriptive word you used for your story. I can imagine the scene so well and your details are on point! Wow, that’s crazy that there are legends of Doggious and how Joseph heard about those legends. I really like you changed the story and I like your story a lot more than the original. Your story is super creative!

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